There are some incredibly rough formatting issues. The use of a bloodstain on most pages renders sections pretty much unreadable. The art feels like it should have been left out entirely and the motivation for the monster attack in the adventure feels like it doesn't relate close enough to the players and could be missed entirely. This feels like an early work, something which hopefully the author learnt from.

I was intrigued by this product and I always like to support RPG creators – BUT – this book is very incomplete. It feels like some sort of advanced draft and not ready for sale yet, certainly not for the price of 8$. Many structural errors and mistakes and some missing content. The game itself is ok, not really delivering the potential promise I thought it will have. Bottom line – it is very amateurish and disappointing and in my opinion not ready for sale in the current state that it is. I would really expect a new updated version of the pdf.

This is the best character sheet I've come across so far. There is plenty of room to record all the details. If there was anything I would change it would be adding a height, weight, hair color and eye color section to the general description area on the sheet. This also could use an area just for tracking ammo. Having said that this sheet is far better than the others I've seen thus the 5 star rating.

Very pleased with this adventure, it is sweet and to the point. The writing makes it easy to follow and still remain enjoyable. Loved the simple design and bumbling GL, the character provided just enough comic relief for a horror adventure. However there are several grammatical errors, nothing major just small things, the most confusing is the "con dog eater" from the Smoke Break section. Overall, very enjoyable adventure